雅思作文范文：犯罪是人們的天性使然
時間：2020-10-14
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報告類大作文，犯罪類話題
Some scientists believe that studying the behaviour of 3-year-old children can tell which children would grow up to be criminals. To what extent in your opinion is crime a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
題目來源：2015年12月12日亞太雅思大作文
題目大意：部分科學家認為，通過研究3歲孩童的行為可以判斷他長大后是否會成為罪犯。問：你是否同意犯罪是人們的天性使然，或者說是否同意我們可以阻止孩子成為罪犯。
思路解析：規劃寫作任務，論證過程分兩大方面：
1.基因的確對人是否會犯罪產生影響：基因會決定人們的行為，一些基因會直接或在環境的刺激下造成人們情緒化，缺乏同情心。受到這些基因的影響，這些人會無法正常表達情緒，產生反社會行為。
2. 可以提前干預防止犯罪：人的行為會即受到基因的影響也會受到環境的影響，兩者互相作用。能夠給孩子創造積極的生活環境，教導正確的行為和情緒管控和調節的方式可以預防犯罪。
審題，找出關鍵詞/限定詞
Nature：這個詞一出，基本上又是常見的先天和后天的較量。事實上，先天和后天的影響很難明確區分，彼此永遠糾纏不清互相作用。因此針對這道題目，對于先天對犯罪的影響，多少總是有的筆者選擇同意，而對于預防的是否有用，筆者也表示同意，畢竟后天的環境影響不容忽視。
It is true that genetic disorders and mental illness have provided explanations for a small minority of offenders with specific conditions. Many genes may affect brain functioning in ways that either increases or reduce the chances individuals learning various complex behavior patterns. Some genes are turned on because of physical, social factors; and some genes that influence directly difficult temperament, impulsivity, novelty seeking, and lack of empathy predispose people to be exposed to environmental risks and make it hard for people to express emotions in what would be considered a positive manner, leading people to engage in anti-social behaviors like enjoy getting lost or doing something crazy just for fun.
Such as it is, as there was general agreement that everyone’s behavior is influenced to varying degrees by both genetic and environmental factors, we can divert children from deviant behaviors through fostering positive environment. It has been proven that behavior is molded based on a set of morals, values and beliefs that are instilled in individuals during early childhood, which facilitates decision making throughout the course of an individuals’ life. Therefore, intervening early in one’s life such as providing instructions and guidance on anger management and emotion language or reinforcing helpful behavior both at school and home will definitely diminish the likelihood of embarking on or persisting in a criminal career.
In fact, it is the combination of both biological and social factors mold people into who they are. Genes only partially dictate the mindset of one that chooses to engage in criminal behavior. Under this conception, viable and effective ways will always be available to prevent children from turning into criminals.
相關詞匯和語法結構
antisocial behavior
temperament
impulsivity
predispose
deviant
reinforce
embark
viable
報告類大作文，犯罪類話題
Some scientists believe that studying the behaviour of 3-year-old children can tell which children would grow up to be criminals. To what extent in your opinion is crime a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
題目來源：2015年12月12日亞太雅思大作文
題目大意：部分科學家認為，通過研究3歲孩童的行為可以判斷他長大后是否會成為罪犯。問：你是否同意犯罪是人們的天性使然，或者說是否同意我們可以阻止孩子成為罪犯。
思路解析：規劃寫作任務，論證過程分兩大方面：
1.基因的確對人是否會犯罪產生影響：基因會決定人們的行為，一些基因會直接或在環境的刺激下造成人們情緒化，缺乏同情心。受到這些基因的影響，這些人會無法正常表達情緒，產生反社會行為。
2. 可以提前干預防止犯罪：人的行為會即受到基因的影響也會受到環境的影響，兩者互相作用。能夠給孩子創造積極的生活環境，教導正確的行為和情緒管控和調節的方式可以預防犯罪。
審題，找出關鍵詞/限定詞
Nature：這個詞一出，基本上又是常見的先天和后天的較量。事實上，先天和后天的影響很難明確區分，彼此永遠糾纏不清互相作用。因此針對這道題目，對于先天對犯罪的影響，多少總是有的筆者選擇同意，而對于預防的是否有用，筆者也表示同意，畢竟后天的環境影響不容忽視。
高分寫作示范
Many have questioned whether it is possible to determine a link between genetics and criminal behavior. In my opinion, despite strong resistance in many quarters, there is little doubt that genes play a part in antisocial behavior and we can effectively intervene before antisocial behavior escalates into crime.It is true that genetic disorders and mental illness have provided explanations for a small minority of offenders with specific conditions. Many genes may affect brain functioning in ways that either increases or reduce the chances individuals learning various complex behavior patterns. Some genes are turned on because of physical, social factors; and some genes that influence directly difficult temperament, impulsivity, novelty seeking, and lack of empathy predispose people to be exposed to environmental risks and make it hard for people to express emotions in what would be considered a positive manner, leading people to engage in anti-social behaviors like enjoy getting lost or doing something crazy just for fun.
Such as it is, as there was general agreement that everyone’s behavior is influenced to varying degrees by both genetic and environmental factors, we can divert children from deviant behaviors through fostering positive environment. It has been proven that behavior is molded based on a set of morals, values and beliefs that are instilled in individuals during early childhood, which facilitates decision making throughout the course of an individuals’ life. Therefore, intervening early in one’s life such as providing instructions and guidance on anger management and emotion language or reinforcing helpful behavior both at school and home will definitely diminish the likelihood of embarking on or persisting in a criminal career.
In fact, it is the combination of both biological and social factors mold people into who they are. Genes only partially dictate the mindset of one that chooses to engage in criminal behavior. Under this conception, viable and effective ways will always be available to prevent children from turning into criminals.
相關詞匯和語法結構
antisocial behavior
temperament
impulsivity
predispose
deviant
reinforce
embark
viable
